Fiction

Lone Rider

What we had.

Illustration by Ruby A.

Capri Sun, Prescott City public school bus, September 8, 1999

Laurel swears that Capri Sun was invented by a child psychologist: “There’s nobody else who would take such pleasure in watching kids consistently fuck up and get pissed off in the noble pursuit of juice.” Laurel’s parents, it should be said, are both child psychologists, which explains why our teacher, Mrs. Kimball, had to refer to her as “Eraser” in kindergarten. “My mother thought it was a brave statement on ‘recapturing my own identity,’ and my father was worried that it meant that I wanted to make other people disappear,” she says, laughing. “I just thought it sounded good. I was, like, five.”

She was Eraser when I met her on the school bus during one of our first rides home. I had a Capri Sun left over from snack time, a lukewarm strawberry something-or-other that I’d been too afraid to drink in class for fear of having to use the school bathroom. I was struggling, as always, to open it by myself, the straw bending just as it met the spaceman packaging.

“You have to stab it,” the girl across the aisle from me said, extending her hand. Within two seconds, she’d shoved the straw into the pouch. “My mom doesn’t let me have these,” she said, handing it back to me.

“You can have this one,” I offered.

There are certain irreplaceable feelings in life. One of them is the act of sharing when you’re a kid, when you’ve just mastered the concept, when you realize what kindness means, before you’re old enough to put a filter on it and manipulate it for your own good. The other is meeting your first best friend.

“I’m Libby Campbell,” I told her as she gulped down the juice.

“I’m Eraser Bunch,” she said. “But you can call me Laurel.”

***

McDonald’s french fries, passenger seat, ’07 Hyundai Elantra, somewhere along I-94, October 11, 2010

I stopped listening after she said “early admission.” It didn’t matter anyway. Everything that came out of her mouth after that just sounded like gone, gone, gone.

***

Auntie Anne’s cinnamon sugar pretzel, O’Hare International Airport, November 19, 2010

“Stand up straight, Elizabeth,” my mother says. There must be a sad kind of pamphlet sent to high school moms every year, alongside the ones about teenage pregnancy and bath salts, titled So You Think Your Daughter Is Slumping.

We’re in line for Flight 8917 to Boston to visit my aunt Kathryn and at least five colleges–two that I can definitely get into, one that I might be able to get into, and two that we’re really only going to visit so we can buy the T-shirts, and I can further my parents’ delusions. My father has brought several application packets with him; the ones with the kids who look like Hogwarts rejects on the front are the ones with the most fingerprints.

Right before we board the plane, Laurel sends me a series of texts from the homecoming dance that I’m missing:

my mother dropped me off and screamed “don’t feel pressured to conform to mating rituals and strict gender roles” so that was great

liam looks like a stalk of corn with teeth you are totally right i love you

rihanna has too many songs

made out with k #yolo #neveragaintho #breathmint

miss u too much nothing is fun w/o u

***

Gingerbread latte, driver’s seat, ’09 Honda Civic, somewhere along I-94, December 18, 2010

This time we talk about our Christmas lists: she says she wants surfing lessons, and I say that I want a new winter coat, and then we don’t really say anything at all.

***

Pepperoni Pizza Combos, Campbell family caravan, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina, February 18, 2011

Laurel believes that Pepperoni Pizza Combos are “the only acceptable road-trip food.” Her mother hates the smell of them, which is why she can only eat them when she’s on vacation with my family. We go to Myrtle Beach every year; Laurel has been coming for the last seven or so. Her parents relented after my father, a biology professor, promised that he’d always make the trip educational in some way. Last summer, he had us hold an informal debate at Cap’n Joe’s Fish Pot: Laurel was pro–fried shrimp, and I was pro–fried clam.

We’re in the way, way back of the van. Our bags are loaded in the middle seat, giving us a wall of privacy from my parents, who are nodding their heads in time to something by the Eagles.

“All I want on this earth is a Cone-A-Rama Big Wheel,” Laurel says, referring to a disgustingly huge waffle cone that we both attempt to eat every year. If you finish it, you get your picture on the wall. She’s been trying—and failing—since she was 10. My father overhears and yells, “Is this the year you make the wall?”

“I’ve got a good feeling,” Laurel says.

“Don’t make yourself sick,” my mother says, annoyed. “Your mother would kill me if she knew I let you eat that thing every year.”

“This is gonna be the year,” Laurel says, wrapping an inflatable pillow around her neck and shoving her empty bag of Combos under the seat. “I’m feeling like a champion.”

I take mental pictures of every exit by blinking my eyes. Next year, we’ll both be in different classrooms, staring out at different landscapes, with different voices surrounding us. I know why she wants her picture on the wall–because she’s not sure when she’ll get back, and somebody has to leave proof that for years and years we came, we saw, and she eventually conquered.

***

Sugar-free Red Bull, driver’s seat, ’09 Honda Civic, somewhere along 1-94, March 31, 2011

If I go to sleep it will be tomorrow if I go to sleep it will be tomorrow if I go to sleep it will be tomorrow if I go to sleep it will be tomorrow stay awake stay awake stay awake…

***

Celebration cake, dining room table, my house, April 1, 2011

Everyone is wearing red sweatshirts and smiling. “I knew you could do it,” my father says, waving around my acceptance packet. Ten points for faux-Gryffindor, I guess.

Later, Laurel asks me if I’m surprised, and I tell her of course, of course I’m surprised, my SAT math score was a giant turd, and I thought I had no chance at all. I don’t tell her that I’ve suddenly become an expert on time and distance, that maybe I should major in cartography, that I know every possible path from Massachusetts to California and that all of them take too long.

Downstairs, our parents laugh together, eating cake, drinking wine, and celebrating their daughters. Over the years, our weirdo mothers have become best friends. We’ve never bothered asking who their best friends were before their daughters met on the bus.

***

Menthol cigarette, passenger seat, ’07 Hyundai Elantra, somewhere along 1-94, May 28, 2011

“If you’re smoking that to piss me off,” she says, “it’s working.”

“My entire life,” I tell her, “does not revolve around you.” I don’t know how to hold the cigarette. I try to flick off some ash and it lands in my lap.

“You have to tap it,” she says, extending her hand.

I offer her the cigarette, and she throws it out the window.

“My mother doesn’t let me have those,” she says, staring at the lights ahead of us.

***

Sour Patch Kids, back porch swing, Bunch family home, June 30, 2011

Our parents have noticed: we are not ourselves, they say. We are especially not ourselves when we are together. They mention winter break, spring break, summer break, anything to make the word “break” sound remotely positive.

I don’t know why I tell her. She smiles the sad, knowing smile of someone who has always scored a little higher on every test and says something about other ways.

We swing back and forth in the humid air, taking turns sticking our fingers into the candy bag and licking the sour sugar from our skin. All around us are crickets, the internationally renowned orchestra for the speechless.

***

DQ Oreo Blizzard, back seat, Campbell family caravan, somewhere along the Massachusetts Turnpike, August 23, 2011

Everything I own is packed into plastic bins, surrounding me on all sides. My parents are—once again—wearing their red sweatshirts. “This is so exciting,” my mother says, her left leg shaking up and down. She turns back to glance at me. “Elizabeth,” she says, “sit up straight.”

***

Kettle corn, Ferris wheel car 18, the Big E/Eastern States Exposition fairgrounds, W. Springfield, Massachusetts, September 14, 2011

We’re here on a “bonding expedition,” according to our RA. We’ve each been given 10 tickets, and I’ve decided to use eight of them on the Ferris wheel, because I just want to sit down for a while. Alex and Meg, who started dating during, like, the first hour of school, are sitting in the car in front of me, kissing as they elevate.

“Lone rider?” the man running the wheel asks me as I settle in with my kettle corn. I shrug, and he locks the door, and soon I’m flying above everyone on the ground, little specks, tiny strangers, thousands of people I might be lucky enough to meet. ♦

34 Comments

  • Maggie August 16th, 2012 7:21 PM

    I love this snack-oriented story.
    “I don’t know why I tell her.” What did she tell her?!?!?! Sorry if this question is idiotic.

    • bugaleeto August 16th, 2012 10:42 PM

      I think that she just came out and said “I think we’re drifting apart.” I dont know…

  • Aubrey August 16th, 2012 7:36 PM

    Tears. That was so fucking good, I can’t even talk about it. Lovely, lovely, lovely.

    - aubrey

  • isadora August 16th, 2012 7:38 PM

    Bittersweet.

    Great piece, Pixie.

  • kendallkh August 16th, 2012 8:03 PM

    Wow, I really love this. It’s sweet and sad and hopeful and written just right.

  • allier August 16th, 2012 8:04 PM

    I really like the way this story is formatted! The food, date, place was so cool, especially because a lot of my memories are categorized along those lines. I did find it funny, though, that Laurel says #yolo in one of her texts in 2010 when yolo wasn’t popular. She was ahead of the curve i guess :) haha

    -Allie
    http://mywordagainsttheworld.blogspot.com/

    • Anaheed August 16th, 2012 8:06 PM

      haha nice fact-checking allier

      • allier September 3rd, 2012 7:28 PM

        oh my gosh. anaheed just replied to me. not to be weird, but that totally happened in my dream a couple nights ago (but you were made of water and ice cream).

    • Fortune_Goddess August 17th, 2012 9:06 AM

      I literally had that exact same thought about YOLO!

  • ToriLynne August 16th, 2012 8:16 PM

    Beautiful, I love this so much.
    xo, Tori
    http://generationscollective.blogspot.com/

  • Taylor WM August 16th, 2012 8:28 PM

    I love the way this has been written, it’s like the best ‘diary’ entry I’ve read in ages and it’s just basically really cool; especially for me as all my memories are linked to what I was eating and wearing (and sometimes the weather, for reasons I know not of…), so this has kind of given me hope that I’m not the only one. I hope… :S
    :)
    http://www.whitemoth.blogspot.co.uk

  • GlitterKitty August 16th, 2012 8:39 PM

    This is ridiculously off topic but does anyone have Washington DC travel advice? Like must see places, super cool stores, restaurants, etc. I’m going to be with my mom, aunt, and sister.

    • Peet August 16th, 2012 9:53 PM

      Go to pitango gelato bc it is complete crack. They have a few across the city.

    • jlichten August 17th, 2012 7:56 PM

      go to 14 street and check out some of the vintage shops there (though they are overpriced), go to 18th street area (adams morgan) and go to amsterdam falafel (go because its amazing and they’re shutting down!) and go to smash records. also go to second story books and antiques. and if you go to chinatown, go to the chinatown express restaurant and watch the guy make noodles in the window because it’s really entertaining. and go to value village on new hampshire if you have time, even though its way outside the city.

    • GlitterKitty August 17th, 2012 8:11 PM

      Thank you!

  • kellyissofab August 16th, 2012 9:25 PM

    I was at the Big E! Every year without fail. I loved this story, I’ve never read anything remotely like it. Flawlessly written.

  • jill August 16th, 2012 9:40 PM

    this story just takes all of my emotions and turns them into beautiful, sad words

  • Abby August 16th, 2012 10:04 PM

    I just cried. Like, a lot. A lot as in, I finished reading this twenty minutes ago and since then I’ve just been crying. This really hit home for me, because I’m leaving behind my best friend in the entire world in one week. I’m going hundreds of miles away from the person that I care about most, and I have no idea how to handle it. She’s always been my rock, someone to fall back on, even when everything was falling apart. And even though I know she’s just a phone call or a Skype call away, it’s awful to think that I’m not going to be able to see her whenever I want. Everything is changing, and I know I should be looking forward to the rest of my life. But the more I try to look forward, the more I find myself looking back.

    • julalondon August 17th, 2012 5:09 AM

      I am in a long distance relationship for more than a year now (before that we were together for almost a year too) and let me tell you; if you really love someone (which i think you do) you are gonna be fine. It’s hard to not see the person you care about the most all the time (whether it’s a boyfriend or a best friend), but if you don’t have a choice and you love that person it’s the only right thing to do. You don’t lose them, you just can’t see that person that often anymore and that fucking hurts, let me tell you, but as i said, if you really love that person, it’s gonna be fine! xxx

  • bookworm123 August 16th, 2012 10:52 PM

    Really creative, and sad. Pointless comment, but I liked it.

  • youarebananas August 17th, 2012 12:20 AM

    perfect perfect perfect

    coming from someone who’s moving into college in 9 days ah

    thank you for writing this

  • clairee August 17th, 2012 12:46 AM

    Oh so beautiful. Love the food categories, so poignant, specific, and evocative, but simple.

    http://modalityblog.wordpress.com/

  • bridiebird August 17th, 2012 7:57 AM

    This is so cool. Ahh your writing is so damn good and interesting. Really colorful, dunno why I get that feeling.

  • girlswithsecrets August 17th, 2012 10:44 AM

    Felt very real and very honest! I really, really loved the attention paid to the small details in life that we always end up remembering. It felt so nostalgic and reminded me of the way I remember old friendships–sometimes by snacks, or places, or locations, or single sentences. beautiful job :)

  • robynjean August 17th, 2012 11:16 AM

    i love this.

  • TheGreatandPowerfulRandini August 17th, 2012 1:19 PM

    This is beautiful. I’ve never had a best friend, but you make me feel nostalgic over times I’ve never experienced, if that’s even possible. Such a fantastic piece.

  • littlenashrambler August 17th, 2012 9:18 PM

    I bsolutley loved this story! I had a mini freak out moment when I read October 11th (my bday!), and how she made a friend on the bus just made me think of Jenny and Forrest. I almost cried!

  • equinox August 17th, 2012 10:01 PM

    Ugh ALL teared up. LOVED this one. so sweet and perfect.

  • ale August 18th, 2012 11:04 PM

    yes, finally! fiction is my favorite part of rookie; i love when there are updates.

  • EmKam August 19th, 2012 12:23 AM

    This is my fourth read on this piece…I can’t tell you anything you ding already know, if you even read these.

    Still crying.

    You’ve inspired me.

  • Hannah August 19th, 2012 2:25 PM

    Unf that was so good, and made me really scared of losing my best friends this year and in 2 years we go to college. :/

  • limegreensunset August 20th, 2012 1:42 PM

    i. love. this.

  • guiltfreedonut August 20th, 2012 10:28 PM

    Pixie, you are an outstanding writer. This was absolutely perfect. You also picked the perfect foods for the perfect parts. Did I say perfect enough times?

    (PS. Wish I could take on that waffle cone challenge.)

  • Peanutpug August 31st, 2012 6:40 AM

    Pixie, I really liked this !!